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I used to have a voice

Published: Jul 25, 2011

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Original picture was taken at the Yorktown Memorial Hospital in Yorktown Texas. The Hospital has been abandoned for like 50 years and it is haunted. Was actually on Ghost Adventurers a couple months ago. So yeah, we shot a horror movie in there and I did all the graphics for the movie. They wanted me to do some of my own pictures in the hospital so here is some of it. Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated whether it be good or bad.

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Model was me.
Concept and Editing by me.
Made possible with the assistance of Kevin-Martin P. SalZburg

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(c) 2011 Angry Otter Productions, LLC

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rbcd

Jul 27, 2011

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Good morning!
Always enjoy a gas mask picture. This one (at least on my computer) is too over exposed top sky and on the mask. The initial attractiveness of the image is not followed up with areas to rest ones eyes and enjoy. There is a tension and balance between the left and right of the image but neither area is 'developed' enough to hold the viewer. Color could be used selectively, more info (less exposed) on the head. More contrast in background between the sky and the bushes (?). A tie in between the eyes and the sky accented by a darker hood...